Wednesday, September 22, 2010
sudden trees
so sudden were the trees
they too searched the sky bend
in groups of solitary living
i who have nothing left
stood within them
and thought of the dried river
and its soil brittle amongst
stars at night
did i disappoint u
did i fail to answer
did the sparrows wait long
did i touch your hair
yes
and yes again
and that was just not loving
years after the trees
grew wild and so did
a blatant sky
sunset
a far window to
your once home
still remains closed.
Poem and Ink Drawing by Amitabh Mitra
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Typically Amitabh-ish...
ReplyDeletePlanes disparate but blend into a union with shadows...with light..
Visceral...
Human and nature conspire..
Luis Cernuda would have been proud to have read this...
Thanks a million Upal
ReplyDeletebeautiful.. your artwork has that feel of dry heat and closed-in trees you speak of in the poem.. I can feel the sun..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Alaka
ReplyDeleteHappy that u enjoyed it
lovely....tremendous>>>
ReplyDeleteWonderful Sir,
ReplyDeleteYou are Superb as usual,Beyond Comparison.....
Dear Anil Bhai
ReplyDeleteMany thanks
I have such fond memories of u from our Gwalior days
Thanks a lot Shaleenbhai
ReplyDeletedear amitabh keep churning out the trash, it is healthy for you rls sengar
ReplyDeleteDear doc, please prescribe some medicine to attain sleeplessness, so that such a creativity can be achieved or rather cultivated.
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